Wednesday, 11 April 2018

Updated Script

EXT. Bus Stop
Faye is waiting at the bus stop, a bus pulls up and she gets on.
FAYE(voice over)
This is me, probably the last time anybody ever saw me


INT.  Police Hallway Day
Suspects are sitting waiting to be interviewed



INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Miss Rais is talking to the police
MISS RAIS
Who would do this to a girl like her?


INT. Councillor’s Office/Day
Faye is having her regular counselling session with Mrs Palmer, based around the other suspects.

MISS RAIS
So Faye, how are your issues?
FAYE
Fine.
MISS RAIS
Are you sure everything is fine?



INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Finley is talking to the police

FINLEY
I wouldn’t let it go this far


INT.  Finley’s Car/Evening
Faye and Finley are sitting in Finley’s car and they are having a conversation which quickly progresses into a disagreement.

FAYE
So, what we getting for dinner then?
FINLEY
Get whatever you want
FAYE
Well what you having?
FINLEY
Dunno yet…
FAYE
Can you decide please
FINLEY
You decide!! Mum and Dad always put you first anyway…
FAYE
Do you know what……….
Faye gets out of the car and storms off as Finley drives away.



INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
Maddie is talking to the police

MADDIE
Weren’t me

EXT. Side Road/Day
Faye is walking down a side road.
Maddie approached Faye and barges her, pushing her up against a fence

MADDIE
Get out my way!
(Maddie pushes Faye up against a fence)
FAYE
I haven’t done anything
MADDIE
You’re here aren’t you?   MOVE!!



INT.  Police Interview Room / Day
ADAM
I couldn’t do this to her

INT. Faye’s Bedroom/Day
Faye and Adam are having a deep conversation in Faye’s bedroom
FAYE
You’ll always be my best friend
ADAM
What if I want more
FAYE
What if I don’t….
Adam gets up and leaves



INT. Mr and Mrs Browns House / Day
Mr and Mrs Brown are distraught that their daughter has gone missing and are currently speaking with two police officers who have been allocated to the case. 
MRS BROWN
So what are you going to do about this?  What is going to happen?
POLICE 1
We are doing all that we can
MR BROWN
Well it doesn't look like it!
POLICE 2
You've got to let us know if you hear anything



Blanka/Text-on-Screen
Police Officer is interviewing one of the suspects, as they believe that they are guilty.

POLICE OFFICER (Voice over)

Just admit to it.  We have all the evidence that we need to prove it was you….

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